spiritual seeker

Rookie - 197 Points (22-11-55 / Malaysia)

Unbound - Poem by spiritual seeker

O love,
your fire a lightning strike,
burning, searing…
your compassion unbound,
heavy like evening rain,
refreshing,
living.
My lover…
I love you.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My wife, my love to you...unbound!

Comments about Unbound by spiritual seeker

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (6/30/2013 12:42:00 AM)

    Economical lines, but the content? Exploding..like a firework..bursting the spark, fire, light and beautiful...feeling_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,536 Points Hans Vr (5/31/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    A small love poem of exquisite fineness and full of fantastic love.
    very well written.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,812 Points David Wood (5/30/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    A loving tribute to your wife. A good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (5/28/2013 5:26:00 AM)

    If everyone has a lover like you........life becomes so beautiful. Really a lucky wife! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 5, 2013


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