Itai Oscar


Unbalanced - Poem by Itai Oscar

My muscled up healthy smile
approaches you, arms outstretched
for a warm embrace
But in return your smile stretches
out its hand to give me a thin sickly
handshake of a smile
Its so thin that a breeze can blow it
away

That's the way of life
Love is unbalanced
Its rare to find someone
Who reflects your love
Like a mirror
Its always distorted.


Comments about Unbalanced by Itai Oscar

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (3/24/2014 12:02:00 PM)

    the last stanza is deep and haunting. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 54 Points Smile :) (3/24/2014 5:23:00 AM)

    soo sweet poem, i loove it
    keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014


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