Ultimate Beauty Poem by Sathya Narayana
Ultimate Beauty
When she swayed in sashay
Swans shied in dismay
At a beam of her splendid smile
The full moon waned in shame
When she walked in woods
Greens paled in acquiescence
Bloomers withered in whispering obeisance
Who else can she be?
But the ultimate beauty!
I dreamed and pined all my prime
One beckon from her in love is all!
Heavens are mine
All else will drain! !
Sathya…..
Wow! Splendid ‘come [a]live’ pic Must be Ten++ dr. sakti
vHeavens are mine All else will drain! ! quotable lines. nice. shan
aesthetic---there is beautiful blend of physical nd divine beauty of a woman that makes her ever so elusive and longed for
won't we all lose our sanity if dreams are denied to us?
I loved it all except the last line. Perhaps the draining of something has a meaning in the east, that is not understood in the west. This is not a great word , or one with impact. That is what one needs at the end. Were it not for this, I found this work to be a treasurable one. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 4:38:05 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Great poem, i love the descriptions you use. Keep up the gift all the best J.L