Midnights Voice

Rookie - 858 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Uh Huh


Living in a four wheeled desperation
At the end of a graveled road
Living on electronic e-mail
And all the mails are hammering me down

I hop around from home to home
More times than than a toad
Has bumps on his ass
Living in a house of glass

My short cut sleaves
Give me much more room
To wear my grief
Like unto a shadowy thief

Stealing thoughts you thought were safe
From your vaulted heart
Like leaching away your vibrant blood
Sucking up your love

Welcome me into your house of peril
Let me steal a kiss
A taste of your lip
And from your soul a sip

Submitted: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,582 Points Patricia Grantham (9/4/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    A very intense write this is and also a most passionate one.
    Reminds me of a love story told with such vibrancy and
    openess. Living in a car and loaded down with emails. Stealing
    thoughts is a good line. Enjoyed this. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,801 Points Vera Sidhwa (8/21/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    Yes, excessive email in a car at the end of a graveled road would make anybody insane.
    Poem with bulk and density. I loved it. Ten of ten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/17/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    as a vampire
    he sucks her blood
    from your hearted love
    and turn strong, astonished
    with the strength of the current
    clouds your eyes and drown
    in a endless red river!
    Uh Huh! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,485 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/14/2013 7:25:00 PM)

    as a toad, the emotions jump from one place to another..at last try to be satisfied with usual gesture of kiss and a sip from the soul...Nice to see the animal in action... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Lucifera Santez (8/14/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    Welcome me into your house of peril
    Let me steal a kiss
    A taste of your lip
    And from your soul a sip.
    my favorite lines.
    a wonderful write.
    loved it.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 649 Points Paul Brookes (8/11/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    We all live in houses of glass it's our souls and hearts that are opaque. A very deep poem which needs reading several times if not many times to get its meanings of which there are many Great poem.10/10 BB (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,181 Points Lyn Paul (8/10/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    I think you have expressed alot in these words Thomas. Particularly the 1st 3 verses. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,702 Points Diane Hine (8/9/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    If you're eating souls, you're on a low-cal diet. You could gain weight gorging on our paranoia though.
    Diabolical but very entertaining! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/9/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    you always amaze me with your fancy humorous words bravo sir you deserve a standing ovation (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,626 Points Heather Wilkins (8/9/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    stealing thought you thought were safe from your vaulted heart like leaching away your vibrant blood sucking up your love. a good read (Report) Reply

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