U One I One U Poem by Anne jojo

U One I One U



You are far
i am far
but our hearts are one
you speak the same as me
our hearts beat the same

you know me
you think of me because
you speak to me

but you like to hide
you want me not to know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlet Red 06 November 2006

its a nice piece though it would be nicer if it is somehow... longer? ? i find it hanging and incomplete, but, if it was you really want then you succeed... for me, it seems that the emotions was not fully expressed...

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