Two Summers Poem by Daniel Brick

Two Summers

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First Summer

The window framed a second-story room,
housing an upright piano, standard black
but with a glistening gold trim visible
to my sight, as I paused on the path
around Lake Como. I paused, leaning
against an accommodating tree, because
two people, a man at the piano, a woman
cradling a violin, performed music
I chose to regard as the sweetest sound
possible on a summer night. Was it Mozart?
Or Beethoven's Spring Sonata? Or did they
embrace the intensity of early Bartok?
Whatever music they played escaped
through the open window, fled across the lawn,
but vanished into the evening air
before it could reach my eager ears.
Oh, sweet sounds or bitter! Oh, well-played
or abysmal! What can a distant mime of music
reveal about their true intentions? But -
we agree a poem is the realm of possibilities,
let us make assumptions full of promise:
let it be then a zealous young violinist,
all of sixteen, and her aging maternal uncle,
a pianist of renown, her teacher, encouraging
her talent to sew the threads of even the slightest
etude into a fabric of beauty. Already her uncle
talks of music academies, when they rest, and
her shining eyes mist over as he raises dreams
to hopes, hopes to possibilities. And so a summer closes.

Second Summer

After the last ice released Lake Como
by late April, after May's sun dispelled
spring's overcast, after June presented
the first full days of summer, I walked
along my accustomed path, stopped at my
accustomed place, and indulged my
accustomed hopes. But the accustomed
window was shaded. I held my breath
for a third of that summer, until
one night in later July, the shade
was raised. But three blank walls
confronted my sight. No upright piano,
no musicians, the air held not the slightest
promise music might yet fill it. I circled
the lake twice, playing snatches of Brahms
and Mozart on my smiling memory...
Meanwhile, in some bustling city,
at a Music Academy, nestled among trees,
overlooking a river valley, the renowned pianist
introduces his shining niece to her first teacher,
a man of legendary skill at turning possibilities
into realities. And so another summer closes,
as music pours out of dozens of open windows....

Monday, August 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: art,education,seasons
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem derives from my summer walks around an urban lake, along with a third of the population of my hometown! Lake Como and the surrounding park, conservatory, zoo, picnic grounds is one of the most popular sites in the city of St. Paul.BTW It is a man-made lake and, yes, it was named after the famed Lake Como near Milan, Italy, which I fully intend to visit some fair summer in my near future!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 06 August 2015

I really enjoyed the clear classification of two different summers with their prominent differences. In the first one I felt to be in the nature, with the nature along with heart winning musical resonances, being lazily under the shades of a tree by the calm lake side. In the second one the harshness of a city life being within the concrete walls but again I enjoyed when the senior entrusted and promoted the young niece to carry forward the beauty of music. Thanks for sharing this lovely feeling.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2015

First summer blew me away with it's orchestration of musical beauty, I could not break away from it's magical spell of raising dreams to hopes, hopes to possibilities, I did not want summer to close! Only wanted it to remain open so I could roam forever in it's poetical promises! Vibrantly and intensely touched my heart and mind, Daniel, wanted more of it's symphony to reverberate in my mind! Expecting more of the same magic in the second summer, but was let down by three blank walls and no upright piano! Oh the sorrow that filled me with that vision, my mind saying this cannot be! Then nestled among trees overlooking a river valley, hope was revived by the image of the renowned pianist and her first teacher turning possibilities into realities. Music then pouring from dozens of open windows throughout my mind! Just fantastic, Daniel, indescribable beauty felt within your words. Illuminating, enlightening, sending musical thrills throughout my being. Thank you for sharing this superb masterpiece of poetical effervescence! RoseAnn

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 August 2015

Lago di Como ''which I fully intend to visit some fair summer in my near future! '' speaking seriously? ;)

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