Two Ships Apart Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Two Ships Apart

Rating: 3.8


The lonely saga
of this journey
upheaved in troubled
waters and seldom
silent in deep sea
very many hurricanes
crossed without
stopping the sail.

The other voyage
full of aspirants
to partner the
solitary queen sang
the war song
dreaming up to
touch the ferry
without fail.

Racing each other
the warriors
fiercely battled
neglecting the
ravages of time
brushing aside
until the loner
wrecked in hail.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 August 2009

Yap, We love each other.....We destroy each other...we are the man of variation....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

neglecting the ravages of time brushing aside until the loner wrecked in hail....collison resulting in wrackage.. it is quaite interesting to note....10

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

two ships apart...it is the art of sway 10/10

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Bob Blackwell 12 October 2009

Interesting poem..............

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DaNa XxX 13 October 2009

beautiful poem...! and really interisting title to..! thanks for sharing.. DaNa...

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A cool story and rather adventurous, as well, or so I thought. It has enough imagery to dwell on. Nice work.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 19 October 2009

Mubeen, I loved the passion of this poem, it is beautiful...yet I am reminded of something once told to me many years ago, 'Things that hurt, instruct...' Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing I would love to have you visit and read some of my works...and comment...if time allows.

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Ben Turner 14 October 2009

great poem beautiful imagry keep up the good work

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Opeyemi Borisade 13 October 2009

Aptly written, lovely presented...Good job Mubeen. Regards

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tay the girl you never knew 13 October 2009

thnx 4 lettin me read this.....i liked it alot ~taylor

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