Two Prayers Joined Poem by Cathleen Hodgkinson

Two Prayers Joined

Rating: 5.0


Lost in the fragrant sultry air of this warm summer night,
Longing to forge my mind and pen in poet form.
My eager words outweigh my inspiration,
A struggle within my thoughts, like the brewing of a storm.

I could write of the mystery of the moon, of castles faraway,
The heaven's constellations, the dawn's last star,
The ember of passion, the whisper of dreams,
Of love lost too soon, the eternal healing of a broken heart.

With pen in hand, I follow destiny's voice, I think of you and I,
How our path's have crossed, two prayers joined, now bound tight.
We only know each other by way of heart, a gift given...held so dear.
Your words end my weary night, my words begin your dawn's first light.

Your sweet optimism of peace, fairytales and dreams.
Your quest to persuade me eternal, that they too, can be my reality.
We offer each other comfort, share words of family, of those we love,
Our words of wisdom, spiritualism and beliefs, our love of the sea.

We summon this devine companionship, to share our wishes,
Our haunts, where we've been, where we need to go.
Through unspoken boundaries, no promises made,
Smiles from within our hearts, words coming from within our souls.

(Undeniably, unmistakably for Michael....'thank you'....)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice piece, for peace and divine companionship. I give it a 10- because also it joins two not so closely related themes: prayer and platonic love. The art of a poet is to find the divine verses to join even the irrelevant ones in an elegant way. Love from Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

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Chitra - 06 August 2008

smooth piece! fine work

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Ron Flowers 29 July 2008

This is a wonderful poem of peace, love and contentment. Thanks for sharing. Ron

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James B. Earley 21 July 2008

A rather passionate piece......as a poet your source material is infinite....yet from all the many sunbeams......you chose a single ray! Poignant indeed....

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