Two People Poem by Keith Brezny

Two People

Rating: 5.0


Two people
Found one love
Over nine months
Over three seasons

Seasoned are the hundreds of feelings
Two people
Twirling words with twisting tongues
Turns too two twirling tongues
Heavy breathing lungs
Until two people..... Aaaahh

A long distance relief of love
Released over deserts
Over mountains
Over lakes

A long distance love
Two people
Found one love
Over nine months
Over three seasons

Two people
Found one love
For many reasons

I love you butterfly.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Distant Butterfly 03 September 2010

Im sure we both know...even though you wrote of '3 seasons'...that our bond flourished alot sooner...for many reasons... It began from day one...we both established from the start... an entirely new and rare connection...so tight..regardless how far we are apart... May the winds guide my wings and keep my snowflake afloat you will always fly with me...because i carry you in my heart. THANKS SWEETI!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 10 September 2009

Nice first poem, it has a little tongue twisting there, i like it

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