Two Of Me Poem by Baharak Barzin

Two Of Me

Rating: 5.0


made two of me
one to call when i hate you
and the world behind you
and
one to call when i love you
and the shadow beside you

Thursday, September 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

made two of me one to call when i hate you and the world behind you and one to call when i love you and the shadow beside you.. I do understand the pain in lines..lest I would be a failure! thanks for sharing Poet 10+++++!

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Daniel Brick 15 December 2016

I admit freely I son't fully understand this poem but it has made a strong impression on me, and that kind of impact is more important than an immediate understanding. Why? Because I can't take this poem for granted, can't let go of it as if it I was finished with it. No, the language haunts me, the contrast between the world and the shadow intrigues me, the alternative love and hate disturb me. I copied this poem and will look at it over time. This poem is not finished with me!

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Baharak Barzin 17 December 2016

i use to shorten hate poems

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