*two Men On A Roof Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

*two Men On A Roof

Rating: 3.1


Two men on a roof
work in silence,
shirts off,
coppering on that slant;
hammer aloft,
arm silhouettes against the sun
for that momentary pause
before the arc, described,
powers homeward
on a pinpoint of steel.
steady slamming beats nail by nail in place.
and tier on tier
progresses to the apex.
Then they stand,
swaying in the heat,
aglisten with their toil -
one foot on each half of the world they built
that slides away from that point
too close to heaven -
and descend to earth.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written June 1979, published in Rejected Anthology of Austin International Poetry Festival 2012
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Schreiber 24 October 2009

It's a pleasure to read your poems. The appreciative attention you pay to the everyday activities that most people mentally catalog with a word or short phrase and move on without another thought makes your work a must read for me.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 May 2009

'too close to heaven - and descend to earth.' Metaphor used in this untitled image is marvelous. Lillian, as if closing my eyes I can see clearly. 10++ with pleasure.

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