Two Furnace Poem by Soumita Sarkar

Two Furnace

Rating: 4.8


A soft voice drunken
can capture all imagination
depth of flirting words
invoked a slow intoxication
tree of emotions rooted deep
nourished with mutual consent
two physical boundary asleep
ablaze in flame of passion
to merge in one destination
one corner of night danced
silence was humming a tune
when desire burnt the nerve
the game of touch fume
thread of fear slipped away
closeness became a boon
drops of honey floated
across the silk line soon
turbulent convulse touched
flashing a fire within
arms and lips joined the celebration
in the course of penetration
two furnace in rhythm
when push hard and beat
pulse rise and vocal cords screech
mountains join with the valley
the gaps seemed fulfilled
no air- no break
no word- no breathe
the space was consummate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 September 2013

'arms and lips joined the celebration in the course of penetration' A hysterical consummation! 'mountains join with the valley the gaps seemed fulfilled ? ? ? ? ?

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R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

Hot hot HOT! long time love you.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 07 June 2013

this is nice, the metaphor is excellently conveyed. beautiful poem.

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