Two Eyes Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Two Eyes

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In this wonder creation each has two eyes,
Through which we watch matters all guys.
These capture light and spread for bright,
We ever judge scene full with favour right.

Two sons become eyes for mother in need,
She hopes daughters too need to be feed.
Mother's two eyes fall in affection among all,
She holds a love flow for children does not fall.

Mother is the nature she nurtures all well,
For unity and integrity she ever does tell tale.
Her eyes are sky and sun glitter with vision,
Her watching mind brings unlimited season.

Billions of hopes she spreads through wind,
For her all children she becomes ever kind.
Being the messenger of God teaches song,
She says ever to follow right path not wrong.

Children get mother by grace of God here,
Earth or Nature holds us in lap ever in cheer.
God and Nature, tow eyes of truth it is sure,
Falling in mother's lap always we should pure.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This creation is wonder. Each person or creature in this creation has two eyes. We all guys through eyes watch matters in Earth. These capture light and spread for brightness. Scenes full with favour and right things attract us and we judge them with eyes only. At least two sons become the eyes for a mother in need. Mother hopes for both sons and daughters and needs daughters too also be feed as well as sons. A mother does not do partiality for children and her two eyes fall on all children equally. She holds a flow of love for them which ever flows and does not fall anywhere else. Mother is Nature and she nurtures well to all creatures. She tells tale for unity and integrity. Nature mother's eyes are sky and sun. They glitter with vision. She has watching mind always and it brings unlimited season of love and affection. Through wind she spreads billions of hopes for us. She becomes ever kind for her all children. She becomes the messenger of God and teaches song. She says to ever follow the right path and advises not to follow the wrong path. Children get mother here by grace of God. We say her Earth or Nature. She holds us in her lap ever in cheer with unlimited patience. Two eyes of truth are God and Nature. It is the sure truth because time obeys command of God and Nature. Always we should be pure by falling in such mother's lap who is great. This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 02 November 2014

Beautiful poem looking at children through mothers eyes. The two eyes captures light, and spread the love equally. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines. Mother's two eyes are reflecting equally and everywhere, which only a mother can does.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 November 2014

Mother equally loves all her children but she sees which of the children is more needy. That make a little difference in treatment. The other children should not mind it. A nice poem.

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Narayana Raghavan 22 October 2014

Interesting piece! revealed some truth! nice creation

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Ramesh Rai 17 October 2014

Eyes are the power of vision for every creature. Without eyes this world is dark. Eyes make us to realise the matter. On the other hand two sons are the eyes for any mother are the specific reason to realise the world. This poem leads to a deep illustration n elaboration. Thanks for share.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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