Two Becoming One Poem by Scarlett Treat

Two Becoming One

Rating: 3.4


Into the deepest night flow
Sweet words of love and happiness!
I can lie very still,
With your arms around me,
Body content, longing satisfied.

You lie sleeping in my arms,
Secure in knowing
That I have loved you too.
I touch your sweet lips,
Remembering their hunger.

Two becoming one
In heart, soul, mind.
Touching, joining,
Holding the world outside,
Needing no more than our love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 02 December 2006

Scarlett, Are going to read this one at Tara & Dex's wedding? Lovely poem... Ray

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Alice Vedral Rivera 02 December 2006

A lovely poem for Tara and her beloved - very touching. avr

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Sylvia Spencer 02 December 2006

Scarlett the words are beautiful Two Become One if you deeply love someone then we know how that feels such tenderness written in this poem Cheers Rosiexx

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Danny Reynolds 02 December 2006

Those moments when you CAN hold the world outside, are exactly what makes the rest worth persevering through. Danny

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Archie Langford 10 December 2006

In these days when the institution of marriage so fragile may the bonds love be strong enough to withstand the vicissitudes of life. I wish them a life time of happieness to Scarlett friend archie langford

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Declan McHenry 03 December 2006

Scarlett. A finely penned piece indeed. And thank you. I am the lucky one here.

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Gregory Gunn 02 December 2006

What a thoughtful, tenderhearted homage to two of PH's finest from one terrific soul in her own right. This undoubtedly calls for celebration, so let's crack some cyberspace virtual champagne for the occasion. Warmest regards, Greg

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Alison Cassidy 02 December 2006

This is a simply stated and lovingly portrayed tribute to two fine poets and beautiful souls who deserve the happiness you offer them so beautifully. Bless them and you. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 December 2006

Sweet Scarlett....OH, YES, YOU HAVE GONE & SLAMMED ONE OVER THE CENTER FIELD FENCE.& ON INTO THE BLACK SEATS, AT YANKEE STADIUM W/ THIS LOVE GEM FOR A BEAUTIFUL COUPLE, INDEED....YOU ARE A CLASS ACT SSS, & A HELL OF A POET TO BOOT...GREAT WORK, MY DEAR! FJR

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