Twisted Day Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Twisted Day



As morning arrives we do see
The breeze we feel sings bee.
Twisting time speaks about day,
We think and think and soon say.

Leaves fall from tree
The hope comes again
To give birth to new leaves
Trees feel cheerfulness
To regain life they think
In another term they stand
On ground leaves fall
Taking compost trees grow tall.

Feel fragrance of flowers you see,
Butterflies adore, flies honey bee.
Sun raises morning tribute does pay,
Twisting time brings rightful day.

Monday, August 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,nature,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written at early morning with observation of starting of new day and life flows accordingly. Trees grow tall on new generation. Life is renewed undergoing rebirth and death. The symbols are leaves in nature. Only we need to feel this with deep breeze. Thinking on this we realize the twisting of time that brings right day of light in life. This is written in Odisha and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 31 August 2015

The poem radiates a message of hope in the shape of the dawn of a new day, regeneration of the forces of nature seen in trees which rejoice at getting new leaves to replace the outgrown ones. This is all very beautiful- the early morning scene. Thanks.

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Alesia Leach 11 September 2015

The circle of life. Great imagery. A wonderful poem! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 September 2015

A very lovely imagery poem, fresh new day poetically sketched in words. Nice to meet the wife of Poet Mahakul! Pls do coment my latest poem on Sir Kalam.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2015

We think! With the muse of life playing around us. Nice work.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 August 2015

Truly, old leaves fall and new take their place like our sorrows replaced by joy The morning with its fragrance and color of new leaf sprouts our life

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Gajanan Mishra 31 August 2015

the sun does pay.. good one..

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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