Twinkling Teens Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Twinkling Teens

Rating: 5.0


Why so haste you tangent thirteen,
Tangerine is bitter and still it's green,
Well you are now a fancy fourteen,
Sweetness increased but why so keen,
Welcome to the age of fantastic fifteen,
Now you have seen many things unseen,
Oh! It's you the sweet sixteen,
Still I advise to avoid this preen,
See now grown to a sexy seventeen,
Can't you wait for elegant eighteen?
Welcome boyfriend say goodbye to the teen,
Best of luck you nice nineteen!

Sunday, December 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: teen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 15 December 2014

WOW'...................... That is AKhtar Vai - Hitting the bull's eye Friends - that is truly The life's ball game. No doubt on it It's a ten on ten Loved it with only 10.

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Valsa George 15 December 2014

This is quite interesting with the Akhtar stamp! ! Tangerine is sour and bitter when it is green! With the onset of puberty, many boys and girls are equally sour and bitter. As they cross the teens, they become mellowed and sweet! Truth veiled in raillery....... Enjoyed much! A 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 December 2014

Every line is twinkling like stars...............10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 December 2014

Bittersweet stages of teens so beautifully depicted.......wonderful poetry.......10/10

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 December 2014

A great social message and this poem is very nice.

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