Twin Triplets (No.4) Course Of Life, Blunt Truth Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets (No.4) Course Of Life, Blunt Truth

Rating: 4.4


The Course of Life


Life begins with a Whine
Moves on with Whoops and Woes
And ends with a Whimper






Sour Truth


I look into the mirror
It bluntly states the truth
And oft, painful is the truth

Friday, February 1, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 04 February 2013

Thanks for your twin triplets series Valsa, love this one most of all, Life begins with a whine and ends with a whimper,

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 February 2013

The twin triplets series are all gems gleaming with life and truth! All so beautiful!

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

Truth can be very painful when one looks within, realizing how truly human we are with all our faults and burdens, yet life still finds joy and happiness within each of us somehow. Love this blunt poem, gives thought to who we are.10++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Soulful Heart 23 April 2016

truth n truth n nothing but the truth......u r simply great...

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 01 February 2013

Grim is the face of truth.Good

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Savita Tyagi 27 February 2020

Excellent. None could state the truth so eloquently. A little sweet and a little sour that is what life's truth is.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

superb/// Life there has risingsun and setting sun Life there has day and night Life there has life and death Reflection of happy and sorrow is the roots of life

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

Course of life and blunt truth have been fantastically expressed. When child born he cries, in life path he faces whoops and woes and in old age he whimpers. The mirror states the truth bluntly. Truth is often painful. Beautifully crafted and amazingly shared. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 July 2016

The whoops and woes of life! Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 03 June 2016

Someone isn't getting OLD, is one? ? It's just illusion, what you see in mirror. To avoid confusion, have another beer! Bri :)

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