Valsa George


Twin Triplets.No.15 - Poem by Valsa George

SUSPICION

A centipede, surreptitiously crawling
With a hundred legs, listlessly crawling….crawling
Until from a covert hide out, it suddenly stings


JEALOUSY

If you rail relentless
Seeing others thrive prosperous
It is jealousy, doubtless!


Comments about Twin Triplets.No.15 by Valsa George

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/13/2013 12:09:00 AM)

    Very good ideas, interestingly similar. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 628 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/12/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    Suspicion and Jealousy wonderfully explained crisply! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,973 Points Patricia Grantham (8/11/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    Just like the centipede stings so does jealousy. They both have a
    lot in common with each other. A sting will soon disappear if it is
    not poisoned. Jealousy will hurt and can eventually cripple the person
    to whom it is directed toward if they allow it. Looks can be deceiving
    Madam Valsa. Love this one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,598 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/10/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Suspicion and jealousy are sources of despair and unhappiness. You tackled them nicely in your twin triplets. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Danny Draper (8/10/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    Terrific and especially the precise language and accuracy of the second verse, brilliant economical language.
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  • Gold Star - 8,178 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/10/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful Triplets. Everything a part of life. Loved reading the way it is presented. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (8/9/2013 8:58:00 AM)

    But we can`t often escape from these.... I have suspected people and things and have once or twice felt jealous of things silly indeed. Thank you Madam Valsa for sharing these triplets. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 327 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/9/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    Frank opinion openly said in few words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/9/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    saying so much, Valsa, in so few words!

    comments by Thomas is surely an icing on the cake. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/9/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Very good with so much to say in a tiny bay. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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