Valsa George


Twin Triplets.No.13 - Poem by Valsa George

GREED

Nature’s bowl so full
Yet with an avarice to hoard,
Marauding waves beat upon the shores!

MAYHEM

Economy draining, prices soaring
Crimes rising, Nature roaring
Life searing, Rulers snoring!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Natural calamities like floods and landslides on one side and escalating poverty and misery on the other! But the Govt.machinery, so inactive! This is the present state of affairs in many states of India! !

Comments about Twin Triplets.No.13 by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 4,683 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/27/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    I agree with the poet note, but the leaders snoring? Are they really snoring in India? They are the ones, who are awake through out the day and night to suck the anemic blood of poor Indians.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Heather Wilkins (6/27/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    this is a world wide problem Valas. good write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 745 Points Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 2:34:00 AM)

    thoughtful twin triplets valsa ji, diagnostic for social ills! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,496 Points Anthony Di''anno (6/26/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    HAARP is one machine that world governments like to keep active Valsa.
    It's as though the world is caught in the withering grip of unavoidable change. The tide is turning and poles are shifting. If global warming is indeed man made, it is only because it is made by men who stand to profit from it or don't care about the futures of their own or anybody elses children. You have it all in there Valsa. A poem that only a true poet could write. Proper job :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,949 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/25/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    Timely reminder about priorities. Time to act. Powerful words logically put. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (6/24/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    How rightly have you added your notes to the self speaking couplets!
    We are on the verge of utter devastation of all kinds
    As the mother of tragedies has no concern for anyone.

    Your twin triplets have enough potential to tell about things beyond the sub continent, Madam Valsa. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/24/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    I think it is endemic the whole world over. Governments tax the poor and let the rich hoard their wealth. Good poem Valsa. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/24/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    Really you have rightly pointed out here I'm at Dehradun Thousands died 15/6/13 20/06/13 no Govt. Machinry took part Politicians are tring to eat the dead flesh in terms of aid flying high in choper .....planning for P E 2014 they are faithful to partiy and not the nation all are gambler playing his own game A UNIVERSAL CALL WE MUST PROJECT THE CALL my humble request to the poets thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 889 Points Om Chawla (6/24/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    Succinctly expressed and how very true. Liked both the triplets especially the second one. How helpless we find ourselves in the clutches of these usurpers of power. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Danny Draper (6/24/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    And sadly many places in the world. An evocative poem, an axiom og truth. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013


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