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Twin Triplets.No.13

GREED

Nature’s bowl so full
Yet with an avarice to hoard,
Marauding waves beat upon the shores!

MAYHEM

Economy draining, prices soaring
Crimes rising, Nature roaring
Life searing, Rulers snoring!

Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013


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Natural calamities like floods and landslides on one side and escalating poverty and misery on the other! But the Govt.machinery, so inactive! This is the present state of affairs in many states of India! !

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/27/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    I agree with the poet note, but the leaders snoring? Are they really snoring in India? They are the ones, who are awake through out the day and night to suck the anemic blood of poor Indians..

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/27/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    this is a world wide problem Valas. good write

  • Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 2:34:00 AM)

    thoughtful twin triplets valsa ji, diagnostic for social ills! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Anthony Di''anno (6/26/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    HAARP is one machine that world governments like to keep active Valsa.
    It's as though the world is caught in the withering grip of unavoidable change. The tide is turning and poles are shifting. If global warming is indeed man made, it is only because it is made by men who stand to profit from it or don't care about the futures of their own or anybody elses children. You have it all in there Valsa. A poem that only a true poet could write. Proper job :)

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/25/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    Timely reminder about priorities. Time to act. Powerful words logically put.

  • Dinesh Nair (6/24/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    How rightly have you added your notes to the self speaking couplets!
    We are on the verge of utter devastation of all kinds
    As the mother of tragedies has no concern for anyone.

    Your twin triplets have enough potential to tell about things beyond the sub continent, Madam Valsa.

  • David Wood (6/24/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    I think it is endemic the whole world over. Governments tax the poor and let the rich hoard their wealth. Good poem Valsa.

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/24/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    Really you have rightly pointed out here I'm at Dehradun Thousands died 15/6/13 20/06/13 no Govt. Machinry took part Politicians are tring to eat the dead flesh in terms of aid flying high in choper .....planning for P E 2014 they are faithful to partiy and not the nation all are gambler playing his own game A UNIVERSAL CALL WE MUST PROJECT THE CALL my humble request to the poets thank you

  • Om Chawla (6/24/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    Succinctly expressed and how very true. Liked both the triplets especially the second one. How helpless we find ourselves in the clutches of these usurpers of power.

  • Danny Draper (6/24/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    And sadly many places in the world. An evocative poem, an axiom og truth.

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