Twin Cinquains - Loneliness / Solitude Poem by Valsa George

Twin Cinquains - Loneliness / Solitude

Rating: 4.7


LONELINESS
Unwelcome companion
Plunging the aged
Into morbid estranging insularity
Loathsome

SOLITUDE
Willful Aloofness
Farewell to disquiet
Gentle wafting into calmness
Bliss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 August 2013

Loneliness and solitude clearly defined in the poem. First occurs unwillingly and the second is self inflicted. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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David Wood 16 August 2013

Loneliness and solitude can be refreshing and give you time to think but is bad for you if that is all life has to offer.

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Shahzia Batool 18 August 2013

very well-defined...one can feel lonely among many, like Bacon says in his essay: in the absence of friend faces are but a gallery of pictures and their talk is just like the sound of tinkling cymbals...and the world is but a wilderness... while the state of solitude has an attitude of tranquility, enjoying himself/herself like the Solitary Reaper, lost and happy in her work, singing to herself...this solitude is the most wanted state in Russell's philosophy also, he offers it as a remedy for many of our social ills, as he diagnosed that we have lost the happiness as we have lost the solitude! ! ! thanks for the beautiful poem Valsa ji! ! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 August 2013

Clearly defined-well done

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Patricia Grantham 06 September 2013

Very good description of loneliness and solitude. You would make Webster (dictionary) very proud. Too much of the former is not so good. Too little of the latter it really does matter. An excellent write.

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Anjandev Roy 21 December 2019

Brilliantly written. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

This Twin Cinquains beautifully and brilliantly expresses your thoughts about loneliness and solitude. We do not welcome loneliness but this is a guest to whom do not welcome but it comes. Gentle wafting into calmness this solitude brings and gives us bliss. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Savita Tyagi 07 October 2018

Lonlyness and solitude Like mist and clouds mingle and move apart. Light of clarity we must keep. Thanks for bringing the clarity. Here is my question....am I just thinking of you or really missing you and your your poetry?

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narayana aghalaya 04 April 2018

loneliness and solitude- appear to be one and same; but a gulf of difference; loneliness- no one desires; solitude- very difficult to get a moment to ourselves! beautifully brought out! we should aspire for solitude; others should ensure that we are not lonely!

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Richard Wlodarski 13 January 2018

Valsa, if there was ever any doubt between the two, you've just wiped it clean. Excellent write!

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