Twilight Poem by Bob Blackwell
Twilight
That time between
light and darkness,
when twilight reigns,
long soft shadows,
at life’s dusk, is the
beginning of our end.
On our mindscape
light, grey, and dark
clouds reappear, as
shaded memories of
sunny spells, storms,
future low depressions.
In our minds eye,
pretty coloured
patterns formed
bring a smile, a
tear, a angry flash
a thunder roar,
a happy sunny face.
From sunset,
evening time
we learn
how times of rest
bring peace to mind,
that dark clouds
can be dissolved.
As our sun settles on
edge of world, it
collects our problems,
dissolves them
into the mist of time,
to rise once more
at dawns moment;
renewed, unsullied,
clean and fresh,
to light a
different world.
This is the perfect poem to start out the day, Bob. It is fresh and hopeful. A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Brilliance shines through your every piece Bob, a pleasure as always to view your work....excellent flowing freshness 10+++
The first stanza itself reflects the mood and theme of the poem so eloquently! The poem also breathes hope and rekindles our hidden aspirations, - yearnings for a better world beyond time, - having reached the twilight hours of our lives! 10 ++ -Raj Nandy
As ever, you stand tall as a poet. I loved, As our sun settles on edge of world, it collects our problems, dissolves them into the mist of time, to rise once more at dawns moment; renewed, unsullied, clean and fresh, to light a different world. Very well concluded. CP
Again you show us the sunset of hope and the promiss of a new tomorrow Thank you.
The magical imagery of twilight is captured in this beautiful poem. You are a rare wordsmith. Bob. How wonderful to know that when the last dusk has been written lights will come on in another world.10/10. As always, Sandra
I was going to write a poem on the twilight, though after reading this I don't think I could have done it as good as you! ! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderful words of encouragement Bob - - description of the sunrise as having washed away our night fears must help us to start a new day afresh.... lovely verse - - 10/10 from Fay