Twelve Hour Poem by RAJAT GHOSH

Twelve Hour



O beloved! Hear out me
What I say solemnly, See
At my face please, away
Not from my sight, sweet, anyway.

O beloved! You say 'nonsense'
For my seeking some sense;
Don't say '‘no' to me hence
For Second is rounding within fence.

You are Hour standing upper
Between eleven and twelve after supper;
Minute is below to you proper
Standing very close to six like hopper.

Mark the Second's continuous moves;
How its ticks make Minute smoothly moves
Towards your slow monotonous moving Hour
Minute must meet merely at twelve hOur.

Climax! Twelve-it is now at last;
Minute now hides Hours' honey chest.
After sixty ticks Minute will discharge Hour
And will wait counting twenty four with sour.

Life is like twelve hOur, very brief sweety,
Let not wend a way with deadly delay,
Charge is full and may lost now.
So be haste always as we are Time's POW.

Sunday, February 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 01 March 2016

A well written poem Rajat.. I agree with Nurul, the pointers do remind us of John Donne.. Thanks for sharing.

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B.m. Biswas 29 February 2016

a unique idea and perfect imagination and execution is really good...nice poem..rajat...two pointers of the clock are lover and beloved....you remind Donne.....go forward.

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RAJAT GHOSH

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West Bengal, India
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