Turning To The Forever White(Sad) Poem by Poet of the River

Turning To The Forever White(Sad)

Rating: 4.5


A single tear falls from the sky.
The clouds shiver and let out a sigh.
The wind they blow turns the falling tears to snow,
As they softly fall around your feet.
You stand in silence as the clouds continue to cry,
The snow builds up on the street in front of you.
This blistering cold, to you, feels nice.
And as the warmth from you is willingly let go,
You choose to stand and freeze.
And be covered in the ever forgiving warm snow.

As the day becomes night,
The shadow of you mellow out of sight,
You make no sound anyone would hear,
And to all, it would seem that you would just disappear.
And no one would miss you, everything would be alright.
As the cold covers over you and your colors softly turn to white.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 02 March 2012

Love the title, and even more the work A single tear falls from the sky GREAT OPENING, the passion in this is great. A sucker for romantic imagery and this delivered splendidly.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 02 March 2012

This is gud...but..u never told us who/what u are talking about...u never hint on his/her/its nature...u only leave us guessing....+ trust me this is gud...bt u shud leave us a clue to the subject matter

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Dave Walker 02 March 2012

A really wonderful poem, like it, a great write.

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