Ruby Mostazir

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Tumi R Kono Din Chhube Na Amake - Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Ami tomer haat dhore rakhte cheyechilam....

Meghra Akasher buk thake doore shore jay,
Abong tumi amar kaachh thake;
Tobuo toh megh brishti namay
prithibi k chhuye chhuye

Kintu tumi r kono din chhube na amaake................


Comments about Tumi R Kono Din Chhube Na Amake by Ruby Mostazir

  • Silver Star - 3,776 Points Wahab Abdul (5/1/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    dejection in love expressed well, like it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 168 Points Ruby Mostazir (4/13/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    thnks 4 da wonderful translations...... are you bengoli? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/13/2013 12:23:00 AM)

    you can't touch me through the cloud from the rain, a droplet all in vain(2) on concluding line but hey, you can't not touch me any day(Wonder fut imagery) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013


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