Tumbleweeds Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Tumbleweeds

Rating: 4.1


Balls of dead foliage
Rolling through the aid of wind
A great fire hazard.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2020

A tumbleweed is a structural part of the above-ground anatomy of a number of species of plants, a diaspore that, once it is mature and dry, detaches from its root or stem, and rolls due to the force of the wind.(from google) great write about Tumbleweeds

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 July 2020

A well scribed haiku poem.... Simply excellent.....10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2020

Hazard! ! Recorded deaths! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 12 July 2020

An excellent haiku......thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 July 2020

..........................A great fire hazard. Cutest crystal clear composition in this celebrating creation, my dearest friend Mrs. Juan Austin. Amazing alligorical alliterations! I have enjoyed very much your lovely careful composed words They are written down in a beautiful way word after word. My grandest applause for the great poetess, God Bless You and your beloved family

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Robert Austin 01 February 2021

I can picture them rolling across the plains of America...

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Bryan Smoot 07 October 2020

Reminds me if living in the Colorado plains...

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2020

dead foliage Rolling through the aid of wind very fine way of expressing. tony

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The characteristics of the thistle is such that its upper branching gets separated from its roots by the waves of wind may prove fire hazard....very meaningful and with a message...10++ 1

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Shaun Cronick 18 July 2020

Just three lines but a lot to read into them about people and life. Many thanks Rose Marie for me a great and neat metaphor poem.10++ and deserved too. Take care and I wish you well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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