Trying To Forget Poem by Mckenzi Lew

Trying To Forget

Rating: 5.0


at one time you said you loved me, but it was just a lie
are you just gonna forget me? forever say goodbye?
i say it doesn't matter, that it doesn't bother me at all
but really its kills me when you never call
i gave you my trust, my heart and my soul
but since you went and did this i think you should know
i take it all back, i'll tell them you didnt mean a thing
so maybe i can forget, forget about the pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erin Duphily 09 February 2008

Thank you! ! Thank you very much! ! !

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 March 2008

so many snapses of love in this site. l love them. good one mckenzi.

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Emancipation Planz 27 February 2008

you try to forget and make me remember.. You took me right back to my first lost love and you have expressed the experience perfectly... another 10

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Tracker Ogryphon 23 February 2008

Kenzi, This is the poemI previously voted as a (10) , It says so much in just a few words. I have re-voted it a 10. Tracker

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Who Iam 20 February 2008

Ms Lew, Your style is uniquely your own, one better than the other, sensitivity and pain; both part of life.Each one a good write.

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wow that is good. you write good poems. :)

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