Try Poem by Nicholas Hrynchuk

Try



I try to be like him,
But he's to good,
I try to outdo them,
But I'm not what i should

I try to impress them,
But they can't see,
When he's right there,
Doing what i wish to be

I try and try,
But nobody notices me,
So i can only cry,
Wanting to be,
Anyone but me

All they can see,
Is a failure,
Trying to be,
Somebody he's not

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yvette Flores 24 April 2010

You dont need to be anyone else but you :) I dont see a failure nick, you dont nedd to try to be anyone else, but you. Who cares if you dont fit in? I dont even fit in but im still living: P You i love you nick, your NOT a failure and your poems are GOOD, just be yourself! :)

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