! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **truth Of Dew***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
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octet of musical tones entwines
symphony redounds by flow of flute
completeness rejoices by a flower
as redemption of soul is inevitable
earth serenades shattering darkness
bespeckling captivity to hued blue
yet i do remember grief of green
pine is saddened by frost of pain
miffed moment loses to notch of night
do we ever delve truth of genesis?
as sparkling dew redeems by light
love diminishes bereft of harmony
being curtained of its lithe of peace
yet fragrance never gets veiled in space
as truth needs no veracity of fact
water is stubbornly hasty by its way
‘…yet i do remember grief of green/pine is saddened by frost of pain…’ Wow! ! Ouch! Ow! We readers are…finest and achefull…imagery ever read by me… 10+++. Ms. Nivedita UK
You have some stunning references to nature in this poe, , , Dr Kar
it is a wonderful lyric poem, very well expressed..thank you for sharing 10/10
aqbeautiful poem with fine words., with poigant touches.well composed too. a hall mark of dr.subbendu kar.the starting para is well taken. 'octet of musical tones entwines symphony redounds by flow of flute completeness rejoices by a flower as redemption of soul is inevitable earth serenades shattering darkness bespeckling captivity to hued blue ' voted10 surya
Imagery, personification and metaphor have been weaved intricately in such a magical fashion here. A brilliant idea of starting a poem on a musical note.
A rich poem! Loved the vivid imagery put to pen. Enjoyed the read!
Dews are desires of yester nights says Ric Bastasa........dont you think it is very nice.............hang overs of past night............like memories sweet and affections which we dont want to give up though life proves otherwise........
A delightful dance of dew drops that refreshes the heart. Well done my friend.10/10
a most excellent poem it sounds as if and then the other part leaving the reader wishing for...iip
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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the elements of nature describing the highs and lows of life...and even taking us beyond these mortal spaces of existence...giving us a glimpse into the known and unknown..