Truth Everlasting Poem by louis rams

Truth Everlasting

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ocean waves beating up against the beach
the cool water against my feet
faces in the rocks looking up to the sky
the ocean waves reaching forever high.
the seagulls flying in to land on the sand
as i reached over with my hand.
gently touching his soft white back
my mind racing faster-never letting up the slack
the reflections of times gone by
when life was young and not full of lies.
the only thing that ever seemed the same
was some faces and some names.
faces and names of a past gone by
as i looked up towards the sky.
trying to figure why the rock faces looked up
and what they could possibly see
as it all seemed very naked to me
when a thought came into my mind
as the ocean reflected off the sky.
the faces were looking up to see
god looking down unhappily.
of him seeing all of his creations
being all torn down.
of human life laying on the ground.
unhappiness all around and not one voice to be found
to tell the world of its mistakes and the lies we live are all fakes.
and now i see what is to be-his truth everlasting.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Winchell 03 December 2008

Beautiful write Sir Louis! Linda

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Erica Buenrostro 25 November 2008

i love this poem.. its beautiful. i love how you discribe everything.: ]

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I love the visions viewed on this poem.. I love how it shows so much imagination great write.. Wonderful.... Krista

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Gave me the picture of the beach until the seagull they have pooped on me....LOL. Well back to the poem it is another beautiful poem by you. Great Job!

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