Trust In Pieces Poem by Regan Mackenzie

Trust In Pieces

Rating: 4.5


You had something of mine
Thick
But fragile as glass
A rarity
As it has been broken in the past
Remember
You had told me that it would never happen with you
But it seems you have told me many things that weren't true
And so it lays in bits and pieces
Scattered and torn apart
Pieces of my trust
That was once the key to my heart.


©Copyright 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Regan Mackenzie 06 April 2009

Thank you :) ............

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MuSiC HeaD 06 April 2009

brilliant..............10/10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 06 April 2009

i know.. it takes years to forge but seconds to destroy nice write u manage to write it in short but in detailed fashion nice write =D God bless: D

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