Trust Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Trust

Rating: 4.9


If trust could be as right as rain

then I could believe in promises again

If trust is faith in the great divine

behind the clouds the stars still shine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 04 September 2014

a nice short poem on trust. u-it is very hard to gain ones trust very easy to lose

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 September 2014

Yes very true about faith. Kudos for the rhyming verse as well. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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Chinedu Dike 06 September 2014

Nice poem but too short. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 September 2014

great divine- trust, believe. I like it.

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 September 2014

Trust make us survive whether onc trusts divine or has trust in himself. Nice thoughtful poem.

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Norah Tunney 18 February 2017

this lovely poem captures the essence of trust so succiently

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Ramesh Rai 15 September 2014

Excellent beautiful write as if you have expressed in one breath.

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Patricia Grantham 11 September 2014

Trust is only a five letter word, but it still holds a lot of power. Without trust life would be fruitless. Good.

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Juan Olivarez 09 September 2014

Short and sweet but such meaningful words. I love it.

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Adeline Foster 08 September 2014

Yes, lovely, short, to the point poem. Read mine - When Love Dies - Adeline

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