Unwritten Soul

True Love When I'm With You

Would you tell my heart
Even in a whisper of truth
If there is any mirror
For me to see my true reflection
More than i can see in your eyes
Because in yours I have found me
True me when i am with you

My way is a long journey
I am a little ship in the stormy sea
To taste all drops of love in this water
I know i will never be lost
Because with your love be my lighthouse,
Guiding me, as true loves do
And I've found when i am with you

Will i ever forget those hands
Thick skin of your hands
Always a silk to be on my face
For this pair that hold me when i was no one
For this hands that's feed me love
Perhaps this is a touch of true love
Because true love when i am with you

Beauty, someday may aged
Your loves however never wrinkle
When each line comes appear on you
They only tell me, oh how many years
You've caring me... and you still
Life can be wiser, love last forever
And i see it on you

Purer water than midnight dew
I found drops fallen from you
When the sun and life ask you to...
Harvest your loves as prove you have for me
For me you do all with no complain
Exchange drops to feed me
Is there any loves to be compared?
Because one true love is from you

God knows what in my heart
Never i ever had a wish
Own a mountain of gold to be mine
But If i could I give all diamonds for you
Above all, i knew things never worth to live with
So enough If i would to have, I'll back my past time
Would always hold hand in hand without a second missed
And this is the only way for i keep my happiness
Because true happiness when i am with you

So many patience you have in me, in me
I know sometimes i did despair you
For that i still learn to be the one
To be the best for you
Worth your loves
For me

In time when you can't hold the strength
I shall return all loves back to you
With true loves I am with you
Because of you
My father...

I see my real reflection in you
Could you see in me?
and this is because
True love when i am with you (whisper)

Submitted: Sunday, September 08, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 19, 2013

Do you like this poem?
4 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem that i chose to celebrate the PH contest

Tribute to someone special, i never write about him before
but this is one thing we should share
not with me only, yours too
The man that love me since first day i born
and forever i know he will
with love unconditionally
I wanted to write this many times but delayed as i
i always cant grab true words of emotion
and many events force me to make it to be here now

This write actually inspired by three stories
My lab friend, Hans and my father&me

and i specially also dedicated to my friend Hans VR and his late father that he lost last few weeks, i just wanted to say, life will be wiser true loves are forever...and never will take it away from you
you are so wise Hans, and it is a reflection of how your great good father
taught you....I am sure he proud of you till the last second he had
and all my friends let wish them both happy always in hearts

_Unwritten Soul

Comments about this poem (True Love When I'm With You by Unwritten Soul )

  • Gold Star - 7,479 Points Amitava Sur (10/7/2013 9:55:00 PM)

    A nice write up with a tribute to her father. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (10/5/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, a great tribute to true friends
    and a loving father. Truly a passionate write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Jr Cuyam (9/29/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Wow soul this is very nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jimmy Li (9/27/2013 6:33:00 PM)

    like your poems, poems with similar views and values often echo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/25/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    a lovely and passionate tribute to father by a daughter (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,088 Points Valsa George (9/22/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful outpouring of love of a daughter for her father! As we advance in age, we come to realize more and more how much our parents mean to us! ! I am sure, your father will be much pleased to read this! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,175 Points Valerie Dohren (9/20/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    An exquisite poem Soul, a wonderful tribute to your father, and a joy to read. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (9/20/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    indeed stunning tribute by brilliant poet/poetess to his/her father.
    touching and moving poem, if i say these words in appreciation of your poem, i don't think so it would be complete justice regarding ur poem...
    more than just stunning tribute, loved it as u wrote it, looks as every core of ur heart was risen while writing.
    he will be with you Soul, INSHALLAH (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,206 Points Ramesh Rai (9/19/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    i have already commented. thank you so much with my heartiest pleasure for you participation with my liking poem. I always wish for long company with your friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (9/19/2013 2:49:00 PM)

    this is a lovely poem, shows your love for your father so much. Until you keep him in your memory, he will be always with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (9/19/2013 4:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful, could be a love song! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/19/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    well narrated, the spirit of the poem is very fine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Rekha Mandagere (9/18/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    True love for humanity is the greatest form of love. The flow, feelings and emotions are of fine quality: -) Soul's special touch for art and humanity: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,724 Points Heather Wilkins (9/18/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    excellent intro to your poem. A great tribute (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,927 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/18/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    I am touched and moved by this nice tribute. Excellent!
    May God bless all fathers with such lovely children as the poet who harbour so profound love for them in their hearts!
    And may God rest Hans VR's father in the best place in the heaven! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Ruby Mostazir (9/17/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    beautiful poem......nice: -) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Kavya . (9/17/2013 4:07:00 AM)

    a lovely poetic tribute to your dad, he sure must be proud to read this poem dedicated to him...a lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/16/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    If a country is to be corruption free and become a nation of beautiful minds, I strongly feel there are three key societal members who can make a difference. They are the father, the mother and the teacher.
    Abdul Kalam
    a piece full of love and care..sweet innocent perfect love for a father shown by a sweet innocent perfect poet (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 701 Points Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    I know i will never be lost
    Because your love be my lighthouse, ... this is the confidence we all cherish forever...a poem rich in beautiful though nostalgic images...a fine read indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (9/15/2013 10:38:00 AM)

    A stunning write filled with your great love and respect for your father that shines so bright from your beautiful words! (Report) Reply

Read all 44 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Sorry I'm still not perfect...., Jessica Anonymous
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. If, Rudyard Kipling
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  9. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  10. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
[Hata Bildir]