True Love Poem by Jhustin Sanao
True Love
When I first saw you
You totally blew me away
With your beautiful face and gorgeous smile
It feels like love at first sight
Having you beside me
Makes me a better man
You always bring out the best in me
And that’s one of the many thing I like about you
But some people are suffering because of our love
And I know that I’m the one to blame
Because they say that I’m not good enough for you
That I’m not perfect for you
I know that you don’t want me to go
And I know that you love me just the way I am
But I want you to have the best
For that I need to be the best
Even though fate is breaking us apart
I swear I will never forget you
Because when I think of you
I don’t feel that I’m alone
I just wish we could freeze the moments were together
All the happy memories we had
All the sweetest moment in our life
Even the worst thing we’ve been through
But for now I want to break-up with you
Not because I don’t love you because I do
I just want you and those people to see that I could be perfect for you
That we are meant to be together
I am asking you if you could wait for me
I promise that when I come back
I will prove to you and to those people that I’m perfect for you
I just want you to believe in me
Is this personal? Or just made up? It's really good either way. Good job.
I like your wriiting! you have to shorten your lines, so we can feel the rhyme /musicof the poem..for example..as I found not with much thought: 'some people, are sad of our love, I know, that I am the one to bleme, they say, I'm not so good for you even not, so perfect too.' you don't neet to put heavy words! continue writting...you are good!
it reads like a compilation of different lines from these popular love songs idea of ur itention is there but lacks in originality
There is always a right time. Perhaps, now you may not yet be prepared but soon enough you will be ready to fight it out agains anyone who may try to dissuade you.
I like it...if you love someone, set them free. A nice one.
After reading your poem, its reminds me a long before and want to say wordless tune but endless rhythm. its so simple but expressed the love what we feel every moment. i will read more.
after reading your poem i feel like love at first sight. brilliant write my frnd. keep it up. may god bless you
true feelings...from the words I can realize that how hard your love....and how sad you are, at the time of writing this poem...I really enjoyed it! ! ! »so close«
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 3:44:22 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice poem. did you fantasize this or experienced it?