True Freedom Poem by Rohit Poddar

True Freedom

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We possessed no possessions, and solved
more problems than statues ever did.
None died of hunger
but survived on love and unity.

There are no boundaries, nothing to die for
a 'Thing' made no difference
but only being happy did.

There is no place to go, but heaven
there is nothing to cry for
and no agonies too.
Happiness being the only goal.

A world full of peace
living for each other
cared for one another.

True Freedom
Monday, July 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
freedom is when we are bounded by restriction(greed, country, false belief, religious boundaries ect.) some where, someone can be truly happy.All we being taught is to love and care and share.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Rohit. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rohit Poddar 01 August 2017

I am missed out on the word 'not' before bounded in the note about the poem

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