Troubled Walls Poem by Heather Burns
Troubled Walls
Weathered walls began to yell
plaster from the ceiling fell
Crumbled walls began to cry
long after the paint was dry
These walls trembled and shook
no more water in the brook
Needing paint and repair
a comb ran through their hair
When your walls begin to shout
you'll know what I'm writing about.
We should be able to read the wrting on the wall ! A great metaphor! Enjoyed this rhyming verse!
When the writing is on the wall we know what we should do, but we don't always do it. A great poem.
wow! a wonderful poem indeed, i hope i know your metaphors..excellent...10
A great symbolic poem, we should take care of walls before they start crumbling,
Beautiful poem Heather. When wall begins to shout, we will be with you... thanks for sharing...
If my walls should start shouting, I'll know it's time to add new paint! Well done, Heather!
dear Poet friends, as we are in our holiday season in my country it finds everyone very busy. Thanksgiving next week then Christmas season begins. will not be on line as much as usual. But I will try to read anc comments as much as possibly. Happy Holiday season to everyone. Heather
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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so beautiful one can recite it without hitch and in rhythm and as your note wall is symbolised with humanity complete poem is awful so brilliant can't be expressed//When your walls begin to shout, you'll know what I'm writing about. A guidance a universal call to guide the humanity I love to recite and memorise this Lovely wonderful 10