Troubled Teen Poem by mikal crawford

Troubled Teen

Rating: 5.0


feelings burst like wild fires
that can't be contained
willing to do anything to feel closer to one another
mind filled with pleasure but doesn't
bother to notice the job he did was raw
regrets fill the mind of the scared teen
thoughts of taking place of his father as a young man
will he run or will he stay
with the thought of telling his family
he has no other option
or could her force her in anyway
to put it up for adoption
sad yes i know but it's the depression of teens
willing to do anything to not get cough in the seen
down falls his dreams & Lying words is what he speaks
& all these thoughts are in the mind of a Troubled Teen..

6/15/2011
(BY: Mika'l Crawford*)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
without a name Face 15 June 2011

it's short but as Mohd said it's strong, well done and you put to flight your regrets, thoughts and ponders, well done.

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without a name Face 15 June 2011

it's short but as Mohd said it's strong, well done and you put to flight your regrets, thoughts and ponders, well done.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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