Triumphal Journey Poem by Queeny Gona

Triumphal Journey

Rating: 5.0


Travelling across a village in the evening,
Suddenly Screamed a boy: hold on! hold on!
Then halted the bus;
A school boy steped in seeking for help with shivering hands,
Chase the bus ahead sir; please! please!
Ten minutes of chase resulted in victory!
The school boy got back his bag.
Thus the boy returned home with joy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 25 July 2009

simple and beautiful!

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Obinna Eruchie 25 July 2009

Such an imaginative little story well penned.

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Surya . 25 July 2009

though it looks a simple theme, the effort is certainly worth commenting.nice write. voted 10 surya

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2009

Queeny such small stories(incidents) really can make good poems, as this one does. But what is more appreciable is the succinct way u could put it. Well done

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