Triplet-Un Named Flower Poem by Valsa George

Triplet-Un Named Flower

Rating: 5.0


When the sun of my sorrow sets
A flower blooms in my mind
I do not know what to name it

Tuesday, May 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2015

You may give it any beautiful name, it will remain a smiling moon.

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Daniel Brick 05 May 2015

This is very tender. The metaphor of the sun setting and thereby canceling a sorrow is really striking. Ironically a flower grows without the benefit of sunlight.It is the first of many good things that are about to happen because sorrow is suspended. The challenge to name the flower show energires will flow toward the positive.

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It must be a special water lily which blooms at night. Beautiful triplet.

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Call it moon-flower, for moon is both mind and sadness. Many go lachrymose with the sight of the moon. Lord Rama wept in the Ramayana seeing the full moon rise and remembering his lost beloved moon-faced Sita. Good one.

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Rajesh Thankappan 09 May 2015

Let the flower remain unnamed for it can then be interpreted in so many fragrant ways.

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Soran M. H 12 August 2020

O M G what amazing poetic imagery we can find here in this excellent paradoxical work? it deserves 10 without doubt.. with Regards

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A magnificent write. Three brilliant lines that tickle the mind. Probably, we can name the flower as Happiness. Beautifully crafted..10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2018

A brilliant concept! Beautifully penned dear madam.................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2017

After the sun of sorrow stes may be the flower of happiness bloomed, may be the flower of smile bloomed or flower of moon bloomed, whatever you name or un name theme is greeat. Beautifully crafted.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2017

Looms, blooms! With the muse of your work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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