Trial Poem by SALINI NAIR

Trial

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Trial is on way as a mistake
Grief march as its dictator
Revive the fall that not emptied
Something hangs as persuader

Hidden ways are tempting always
To reach the summit for a new blast
Rain is a tactic of lively nature
To wipe the boredom with left hand

That stream is abundant in its ways
Long to the bottom part of life
Implicit tact that burst itself
Grievance that fertile chances

Shrewd thought is active inside
Wipe it with an active package
So that the stream withdraw inside
A selfless moment of extreme wisdom

Greedy life persists inside
Grief is personal part unexplored
Revoke the tears in a silent sniff
For a smile that polish whole world

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Friday, January 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Never bother others with our grief,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 02 January 2015

Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world The concluding para had great philosophical insight. Loved it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 02 January 2015

Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world The concluding stanza had great philosophical insight. Loved it. | Delete this message

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 January 2015

Beautiful poem Salini. Thoughtful words..... Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world... Very true said, we all hide our tears behind our smiles. Loved reading it. Wishing you a Happy and Prosperous New Year 2015. God Bless you!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 January 2015

Very insightful and brilliantly penned with amazing lines.......yes we are carrying painted smiles behind hiding distress over affliction or loss; sharp sorrow; painful regret that none cares to bother......and this is life....very well composed...10

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Kee Thampi 11 January 2015

a poem for purification Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2015

Trial is a mistake in hidden ways. This is definitely presented well in poem. Each line speaks of new essence.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2015

The very ways of mankind on this earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 January 2015

Greedy life persists inside Grief is personal part unexplored Revoke the tears in a silent sniff For a smile that polish whole world Great thought in beautiful lines.

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Valsa George 05 January 2015

Even when grief stricken, we can cover our pain with a smile so that others won't grieve over us! Quite insightful!

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