Trapped Poem by Madhavi Grace

Trapped

Rating: 5.0


Trapped in the fog
cant find my way
I scream, I cry in vain
fog thickens like cloud
about to rain,
nothing can pass through
not a sound or ray
none is around or can hear
I close my eyes, and pray
only god is my hope
I crouch and sit on a rock
in the cold hard wind i knock
this is my test of life
I must not give up but strive
and I must keep my faith
he is not far away
perhaps with somebody
more needy than me
and will surely pull me out
I know he is on his way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 18 January 2021

read this poem again today and my heart opened up to the distress in it--powerful write--powerful experience to read and contemplate--the desperation and the faith in every line --a journey through a trial of faith--5 stars

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Susan Williams 06 October 2020

fog thickens like cloud about to rain, - - - - - - - - - - - -good image choice

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Wahab Abdul 30 June 2012

excellent, the ending is exquisite

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