Trapped Poem by hema ravi

Trapped

Rating: 5.0


The
mind
triumphs
walks ahead.
Heart still longs and crave, .
trapped, does not let go, dies in shame.

Hema Ravi,13.08.09

(Fibonacci poetry was founded by Gregory K. Pincus last year as a 6-line poem that follows the Fibonacci sequence for syllable count per line.

For the 6-line poem that means:

1 syllable for first line
1 syllable for second line
2 syllables for third
3 syllables for fourth
5 syllables for fifth
8 syllables for sixth0

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 03 February 2010

dear hema nice composition... will you please go through my oneryus?

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Kesav Easwaran 22 October 2009

Fibonacci series alike the poem builds up nice...artful work Hema...mind over heart? 10

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