Transitions Poem by Eddie Roa

Transitions

Rating: 5.0


Boyhood summers went fast
Passing through woodlands
In search of wild fruits and berries
River crossings and sandy beaches
Keeping cool from a torrid sun
Spider hunts at first light
Matchbox condos overfilled
Rites of manhood bravely faced
Tearful dips into the river
After risking a barber's cut
On your budding manhood

At the end, a thorny threshold,
A one way portal to an unknown,
A gate creaks close just this once

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 23 April 2009

The final three lines are quite truthful and philosophical...well written10

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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