Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Tranquil Place


Man's world's
Filled with chaos
Peace seems to be
Only a dream.

I thought there's
Order in the jungle
But man felled trees
Bare it's without order.

I thought it'll be
Quiet on the mountain
Man has blasted
The rocks out of order.

I thought the great
River's fresh and cool
Man sends all waste
Into the flowing water.

Hope man'll one day
Realize his mistakes
And try to correct'em
To make it a tranquil place.

Submitted: Tuesday, July 29, 2014

Topic of this poem: peace


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  • Veteran Poet - 4,816 Points Savita Tyagi (8/8/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Man will not realize his mistake as long as he is over taken by his greed for unlimited profits. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,614 Points Amitava Sur (8/7/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    The way the menace is occurring all over mostly by human, I'm afraid man will realize then only when the human race's existence itself will be at stake. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (8/5/2014 11:58:00 AM)

    Though I have no faith in man creating anything tranquil; I will not say the same for you Tirupathi :) This is quite a peaceful and beautiful thought you have shared (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 8,902 Points Mr. Nobody (8/2/2014 9:46:00 AM)

    If not, I guess we reap the whirlwind
    of effect from our causes so sinned


    very nice write!
    I don't think the poets are damaging the world (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with great meaning. If man realises, all his mistakes and corrects them within time, we can save it from further destruction. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (8/2/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    If we disturb the nature we have to suffer as well we are suffering, The human being should stop this criminal activities at least from just now.. A good message through your great write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,614 Points Amitava Sur (8/1/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    Very truly you did say. But will it not be too late to rectify anymore? ?
    A very important issue...... loved to see this. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (8/1/2014 2:46:00 AM)

    Pollution, misuse and overuse are thieving the splendour and beauty of this tranquil Earth! Will man ever come to realize his folly I wonder! A thoughtful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,969 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/29/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    wonderful expression, the fact you have stated my dear poet, congratulation. (Report) Reply

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