Tracks Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Tracks

Rating: 2.8


Snowflakes fall
in silence.
As not to wake
the beating heart
of Winter Wonderland.

All rabbits do appreciate
that foxes leave
clear tracks.
So, if a hare
is on the trail
behind the fox
it is a give-away.

All other times
it's back to
fox eats rabbit.
Such a habit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 October 2005

Very nice...I felt the rythmn of it. I liked it!

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Raynette Eitel 09 October 2005

Herbert, your first stanza promised more than it delivered. It is just lovely and musical and thrummed my heartstrings. More, more. Raynette

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