Unwritten Soul

Towards End

Journey of time flows our life
As if in adventure in the sea
We depart from a start toward end
From land we have met
Treasure of wealth we borrow
In a ship with us in any way
Way down till the end

Hunting treasures
Not gold i love among all
If you love it i dont mind either
But the only thing i wished to be last
This ship, our only benevolent sole ship
As together we are sailing on the blue liquid
The ship that promise you to deliver your gold
Though nothing i wanted, be united toward the end

Togetherness we work this ship in this wide oceans
Benevolent ship of mine, a friend-ship for us
Part of this ship, made by each of you
If not the strong wooden care given
Never we can stay to sail my dear
And where we will move? where
If without waves who deliver
Be my masts we fly the sails
Reason why you are ship-heart
Help me go, and move on
Wind blows to company
From angelic breaths
Blessing from above

Across the wild seas, we survive thousands miles
When storm comes whispering separation
Hold on dont break each of my souls
Before we meet the land to harbour
Will we finally safe reach home?
Without a mind of our captain
Here i to remind my souls
Nowhere we will reach to
Just lost we are, we are
And love is a direction
Our captain's vision
But be united my all
Be one my souls, my people
Dont we break trusts, listen to captain
Someday we will landing to your dreamland
I, I am not a captain, not dream your gold coins too
I just a crew that sail my life waiting my time toward the end

While sailing, do tell our hearts
Not gold we have as the most precious
But be as one together is precious more
Rare than gold, to find one called loves
Still in our journey you can hunt for treasure
To fill your need in many boxes
Just loves for all in my chest
Nothing more i want

No one i am stand here as
But if my voice is enough to be heard
Before I harbour my last breathe sooner
To a gate of new life we will enter
I dont ask your golden coins
Just be one with me
Together in our ship
While waiting me move
Toward the end of my time

Wherever we heading
Someday we will anchor a life
Toward the end,
Our final destination

Submitted: Saturday, June 01, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 01, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Captain Cur, you are my captain that inspired me to write this...
Our life is like a ship, each people and crews, waves, wind, weather play important role while sailing our beloved ship in this life..toward destination..if we be one we will survive in sea storms..
and i feel sad why people come to against leader...listen to captain, our leader (head of society, country, or anything) be united...let sail peacefully in this life, we may find that love is the most precious treasure, that gold dont have..not even in a treasure scroll map...the only one we can get, listen to the captain and be united, and think to be better not to selfishness. May we feel contented in this ship or benevolent friend-ship_Soul

Comments about this poem (Towards End by Unwritten Soul )

  • Silver Star - 3,342 Points Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    A ship sailing over the not so merciful seas. Those on board heeds the
    Captains orders so that they may arrive safely to their destination. The sea
    and wind though is controlled by the hands of God. All on board must play
    their part to see that the ship and everyone survives. Please read my poem
    An Angry Sea. A very inspiring write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,787 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/13/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    whenever we choose the ships to board such as friendship, hardship, dictatorship and many more, we are in trouble and this concept is further strengthened through the words and commands.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/8/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    You have built all the thought on symbolism from sea and ship. I feel some of the lines could have been arranged easily into rhymes but perhaps it's poet's choice. I remember a writing by Khalil Gibran that our lives are ships sailing on the ocean of time and our passions are like sails. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/6/2013 3:16:00 PM)

    Excellently written poem my friendship ha ha ha! And thanks for your comment on my new poem...
    No comparisons, but I agree with Robert.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,037 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/6/2013 2:10:00 PM)

    A golden epic and how nicely poetic way u draw d analogy btw a ship n humans n sea, wow! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (6/6/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    A marvelous poem, Soul! Philosophical, telling the truth of life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/6/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    I think you are b.etter than the captain (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Saadat Tahir (6/6/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    there really was no need for a lengthy poet note...
    the poem is open to the mind and wit as a nice piece of verse.... talking of the time and tide.
    although a bit drawn out but the serrated effect it creates physically is a pointer to the vagaries of time
    a wave like effect now rising now falling.... v nice
    liked reading

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (6/5/2013 9:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful images woven into a poem with great meaning.
    Excellent soul. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,183 Points Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    Superb write Soul, enjoyed reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (6/4/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    You have a sensitive soul and wherever you go your friends will be with you. By sea, air or earth. Always protecting you! Kisses Soul. You know how make a friendship. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (6/4/2013 4:01:00 AM)

    we make our friendship like a ship.guide it toward the destination like a captain.friendship would be the most precious thing that a captain can pirating.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Scotty Dogg (6/3/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    Wow! One of your best. A classic here on Poemhunter. I love your poems! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Autumn Winds (6/2/2013 7:03:00 PM)

    If we survive the storms, we'll again something rarer than gold. Lovely meaning
    -A (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shiny Princess (6/2/2013 5:06:00 PM)

    Woooooooooww gorgeous (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,993 Points Wahab Abdul (6/2/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    ''And love is a direction'' wonderful line.. and i am with Captain Cur while assessing the poem.. love it.. very much.full 10.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (6/2/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    A magnificent poem filled with vivid scenes and deep emotion.
    Friendship is more valuable than gold, what are all the worlds riches
    if we have not one to call a friend. Thank you for these beautiful words,
    they sparkle like gems and will line and compass my treasure map,
    speaking of which, I came upon an ancient document, much adventure
    awaits us my dear friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Terry O'leary (6/2/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    Splendid poem, Soul, splendid! Terry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Lyn Paul (6/1/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Someday we will anchor a life beautiful truthful words. You have an amazing Soul. Pretty special for Captain Cur. Your words are so deep from the heart with so much to offer others. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/1/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    your one poem is heavier then my all poems taken together
    you are my inspiration of writing poems here (Report) Reply

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