Touching Tendrils Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Touching Tendrils

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TOUCHING TENDRILS


Touching tendrils feather fills life’s song,
Existence flexes butterfly bright wings,
New heights attained, unchained brain changes rings,
Dreams shared bear forward twinned emotions strong.
Ease of mind both find - no right, no wrong -
Renewal soothes both restlessness, stress stings.
New stirrings, purrings. Pair together brings
Empathy expanding before long.
Sensitivity feels 'I belong',
Sees comfort sharing peace not scrambled strings.
From Time’s aggression and ‘repentance flings’
Open hearts share tenderness, prolong
Reach where each learns from each, teach insight clear,
Magic touch as feather light as dear.


25 July 2001 revised 13 December 2008
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See ‘Tenderness For’ previous version below

‘repentance flings’ see Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam – Edward Fitzgerald


Tenderness For...

Tender feelings fill life with soft song,
Existence, like a butterfly, finds wings,
New heights can reach to teach us many things -
Dreams forward look, hearts share emotions strong.
Ease of mind we find, - no right, no wrong, -
Reduced is tension, as when bell joy rings
New love with bridal pair together, brings
Empathy, understanding, vision long.
Sensitivity feels 'I belong',
Sees, confident, a future free from strings,
Free from aggression, - Time's unpleasant stings
Outlawed are, all turns tenderness, strong.
Rose without a thorn, light fair and clear,
may guide our way each day, each month, each year.

25 July 2001

Touching Tendrils poem © Jonathan Robin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 13 December 2008

Both touchingly beautiful...thank you

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