Touching Petals Poem by Tears In Rain

Touching Petals

Rating: 4.3


An apparent promise of nurturing powers
Another offering of healing showers
Silently we shared these gifts of ours
Like flowers
Flowers touching petals

One soul discovers selflessness
Another beauty unabashed
They caress but briefly nonetheless
Like flowers
Flowers touching petals

Almost opening to the reborn light
Poetry in motion, rekindled delight
Unlikely lovers lost in the night
Like flowers
Flowers touching petals

But human hearts they hesitate
They hope, they dream and they complicate
They fear the flood, the tears, they’re delicate
Like flowers
Flowers touching petals

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not The Pilot 14 February 2008

i'd like to hear the music behind you. i'm more of a musician/songwriter also as you've said you are. but i do enjoy the words.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 15 August 2005

Nice one I like it Lylyanna

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Hopeu Likadapoem 28 July 2005

Very nice deep and touching.keep up the good work

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