Total Eclipse! Poem by Geoff Warden

Total Eclipse!

Rating: 5.0


Time unto time
A door's closing
A seasons change
The end of ones pristine
Time unto time
A door's opening
An' season's anew
Yet one shall be missed
Moment by moment
Account of count
Thine pages of living proof
Moment by moment
count thy count
For your reminisce remains
Eclipse after eclipse
Toll upon toll
Always there for the need
Eclipse after eclipse
Toll upon toll
Always the planting of seed
Brother unto brother
Closer than blood
And a promise never unbroken
Brother unto brother
You are my blood
an' forever a part of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 December 2006

Intense presentation...Graduated fulmination makes this gem work sopowerfully well...Superb work, Sir G.....LIKE THE VERSE REPETITIONING... ~ F. J. R. ~

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Geoff Warden

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