Clouds crying
Stones sighing
Nightingales moaning
Gardens groaning
Sun shivering
Earth quivering
Lack of kindness
Total darkness
(2008/6/25)
i had visions in my head while i was reading this.... very good piece.
Be not afraid of darkness, my friend. Even if it is total night. This only adds nobleness and fantastic sounds to a voice of a nightingale........10.... Tsira
Very deep persian..........the emotion burns through the page...10 best wishes Jon
A poignant and touching poem, perfect metaphors! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
Excellent writing, a poem packed full of feelings, well done,10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A deeply sad poem whose beauty touches the emotions felt through your lines. 10