a coin tossed up
to know what is my future
god held it up there
This one is brilliant Samanyan.....a well composed Senryu poem.10
This shows that God, not the coin, is the judge to decide our future based on our day to day performances.
GOD held the coin, because it was and always will be his decision to make. a ten
Great philosophy of the future of life or the hereafter.
hehehe hats off to you! great tolstoy which depicted in the 'war and peace' you said in just 3 lines! 101010101010+
Sometimes it is difficult to understand God's will, or maybe He gives us the permission to decide for ourselves.Great poem......................10+++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a dazzling creative mind you have Sam..................10/10