# Toss - 3 Liner Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Toss - 3 Liner

Rating: 5.0


a coin tossed up
to know what is my future
god held it up there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 25 August 2009

What a dazzling creative mind you have Sam..................10/10

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Sandra Martyres 25 August 2009

This one is brilliant Samanyan.....a well composed Senryu poem.10

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Rakesh Bedi 25 August 2009

Something unique; a class in itself, sam!

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Carol Gall 25 August 2009

excellence in this one 10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 August 2009

This shows that God, not the coin, is the judge to decide our future based on our day to day performances.

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Louis Rams 13 September 2009

GOD held the coin, because it was and always will be his decision to make. a ten

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Joseph Poewhit 07 September 2009

The sun stood still one day

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 September 2009

Great philosophy of the future of life or the hereafter.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

hehehe hats off to you! great tolstoy which depicted in the 'war and peace' you said in just 3 lines! 101010101010+

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

Sometimes it is difficult to understand God's will, or maybe He gives us the permission to decide for ourselves.Great poem......................10+++++++

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